I think I was in 5th grade before I was allowed to write in pen. It's a stark contrast to many schools in Europe, where they are already writing *with fountain pens* in kindergarten.
Nice story idea. Clean up your line work. No extraneous squiggles. And don't use gradients if you can find another way. For a kickball, for example, that shouldn't be too hard.
Good luck and till next time.
thanks for the review i'll keep that in mind
Nice visual effect. Let's see where you take it when it's ready.
Well Drawn but boring
Drawn and colored very well. Get's boring fast.
Fun Game, but not Random
Random means "lacking a definite plan, purpose, or pattern", not "lacking a unified style".
Fun game, nonetheless.
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